Another chapter has been added to The Dark Within. Check it out. I hope you like it. I also updated Foreseen with another edited chapter one. There isn’t much changed, only a few minor fixes. Chapter one should be close to the finish line. Chapter two is only one draft behind it, while the rest are two drafts away from being close. But keep checking back, I should continue to have something new every week!

A few new things to report. Chapter 3 is up for The Dark Within, hope you enjoy it. I updated chapter 2 from Foreseen. As I’ve said before, Foreseen is going through major editing and things are changing all the time. I’m not going to warn about all of them, just the full chapter edits. And there is also a new blog entry, which talks about what I’ve been working on.

Some quick news: Chapter Two has been added on FictionPress for The Dark Within. So, check out the Books page. It’s very rough, but I wanted to get it up. I also added a blog entry.

I’ve updated all of Foreseen with the changes from my first round of editing. I’m starting my second round of editing, so I have also updated the first chapter again. The events have been changed a little and I hope it’s for the better. I also updated the first chapter of The Dark Within. Only the first section/scene has changed. I might get to the rest at some point. Going to be working on the second chapter for book two, so keep checking back for that.

The edited versions of chapters 14-16 are up on FictionPress for Foreseen. Still only on the first round, so not too many big changes. But next round should produce some bigger difference, so you might want to wait until then to take a peek. I also added a blog entry yesterday, so check it out.

I have updated the FictionPress page for Foreseen. Chapters 10-12 are updated. The bigger changes will probably come the second time around. But there are some small changes you might want to check out. But I’d suggest you wait until I’ve gone through it a few more times. But if you want to see the process, by all means, check it out.